Television evolved from past to present with technology.In
past,there was only one channel in television,and ıt was colorless image but
now,there are all kinds channel and It’s very colorful,sharp image.But also Tv
increased a crash.Some people believe that tv is very useful,but ın my opinion
Tv is very harmful because of several reasons.Such as waste of
time,advertisement traps,health.
The first reason is waste
of time.Children always watch tv in their free time.Why do children read book
in their spare time? Because They are dependent on tv.So children are
unsocial.According to reseach,approximately 72% children who watch television
are more introvert in their life.
Another reason is
advertisement traps.Children like watching advertising of toys.Then children
want toys.This situation is a real problem for families.Also ıt’s harmful for
the budget.For example, ıf you have a child and you are poor,you will probably
cause a problem adv.You could not get everything your child sees the adv.Then you will be
unhappy.
The last reason is
health.If child watches tv a long time, child will have eye problems.If
children always eat quickly in front of Tv,They will be
obese.Micheal,dietician,said’’You should not prefer to eat quickly,because you
can put on weight.It’s poor health.’’
To sum up,Tv is harmful
for children because of reasons that waste time,adv traps,health therefore
families not allow children watch tv a long time.
your content and organisation is successful. your topic sentences are clear. but maybe you can change the form of topic sentences:
ReplyDeletethe last reason why I support tv is harmful is the negative effects tv has on health.
tv increased a crash?
several reasons such as ..
why don't they read ..
they are addicted to tv. (instead of dependent)
eye-disorder