Friday 23 March 2012

Is Living In Big City Better



In recent years ,population has increased therefore people who migrated from the village to the big cities are bigger.In past cities are not crowded and big but now,cities are crowded and very big such as İstanbul,Antalya,Londra.Advantages of big cities has increased.There are a lot of school,jobs,hospital in big cities therefore it became the focal point of big cities.Some people believe that living in village better but ın my opinion I think it better to live in the big city because of several advantages such as entertainment,education,job opportunities.

      The first advantage is education.Education very important for people.Big cities has got a lot of university such as İzmir.Students wants each department in available to these universities therefore students prefer to big cities.Quality of education is higher in big cities.According to research,approximately 85% the number of students are more big cities.

      Another advantage is entertainment.There a lot of cafes,pub,disco,concert in big cities.If you have a good time,you will go out with friend in concert.Night life is essential.Do you like dancing?or Do you like listening to live music ? If you answer yes!! You should prefer to big cities.

      The last advantage is job opportunities.Job opportunities are higher in big cities because there are a lot of company.You can easily find a job.ıf you are successful you’ll probably get promotion in big cities.Micheal,employer,said’’My company has been evolving up to now so Employee is very important for my company.’’

      To sum up,It has got a lot of advantages. ıf you want good education, ıf you don’t want get bored, ıf you want have a fun,you should prefer to big cities.You will not regret it never.

2 comments:

  1. just choose one: ın my opinion or I think. dont use both of them.

    ın your thesis you mentioned village, so before your thesis you should also talk about village a little.
    maybe you can support your topic sentences better by writing more.

    some grammar mistakes but not very important.

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  2. hımmmm I like this essay. Particulary, 3th paragraph and conclusion paragraph. you strengthen to topics with questions. It's very nice. I wish continued your success :)

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