Recently,Tecnology has been developing.Especially TV such as HD,3D therefore tv sales has been increasing.There is a TV everybody's home.Is TV benefitial ? Sometimes TV includes bad things for people especially for children.Although some people believe that TV is useful I believe ıt is bad for children interms of their psychology,health problem and their families budget.
first of all wathcing tv is bad for children because TV influence on children's psychology so children usually have psychological problem.For example,ıf children always watches on TV ,children might be unsocial Furthermore children could be dependent on TV. Yelda,psycholog,said'' some children is very angry and they are not responsible for home and school.So they neither do their homework nor do housework.Instead of watching TV,they should read book.''
Another reason is healh problem.If children watches TV for a long time, child will have eye disorder.If children always eat quickly in front of TV, they will be have obesite.Micheal,dietcian, said''You shold not prefer to eat quickly such as hamburger,pizza etc.Because you can put on weight.It's poor health.Another thing is that children suffer from backaches because they sit too much . ıf they continue this,they can be have humpback day by day.
Some people claim that watching TV is useful.They think children learn new things from TV such as news,games,film etc.They may be right to some extent however I believe tv is bad for children's families budget such as advertisement traps.Children like watching advertising of toys then children want toys.This situation is a real problem for families budget.Their families maybe could not get everything their child sees the adv.
to sum up, These are just some reasons why watching tv is bad for children such as psychology,health,families budget.Children is very important for family so their families should be careful and protect children against harmful things such as TV.
very good subject, and paragraphs. Search in particular paragraphs. great with the single word of introduction and conclusion :)))))
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ReplyDeleteI like your essay Tuğba.
ReplyDeleteyour thesis is clear,
you have topic sentences and your body paragraphs are rich enough.
but, maybe you can write your second topic sentence as: another reason is that watching too much tv leads to some halth problems.
your conclusion also is appropriate.
there are only some grammar problems in your essay.
shortly, nice essay..