Have you ever thought about the importance of the place we live? Many people are not aware of the significance of the residence for them.The most common places people prefer to live are village and city. However we,somehow come across disadvantages or advantages of the residence in any phase of our life.Living a village and living in the city have lots of differences but there are three main contrasts between them social life,economy,facilities.
The first contrast is social life.Social life is very important for people so people prefer to live in city because ıt offers variety of options to entertain people.For example; the city has a lot of discos,cafes,shops,cinema,theater,sport centers where people spend free time however the village has a fewer entertainment place.Moreover village has more passive social life than city.Also village has not nightlife because instead of having fun, generally many people watch tv or fall asleep.So unlike city,village are not places of entertainment.
Another contrast is economy.Living in the city is very expensive such as house rent,food,transportation,communication.For example ıf you are living in the city, you must purchase food in the shops or bazaar however if you are living in village,you does not have to buy food because you might grow tomotoes,patatoes,onios etc. So it is natural.Moreover ıt does not include hormone.Besides,ıt is very cheap.Therefore people living in village are healthier than people living in the city.Mary,reporter, said that'' people who consume natural food live longer than other people.
Last great difference is facilities.The city has a lot of facilities such as hospital,school,education,job.However the village has a few hospital,school so many people are not pleased this because a lot of tihngs are limited in the village such as a school,a hospital.so people can not job easly.Furhermore There are small houses and fields so Generally people could be farmer.Moreover city have got variety of hospital,school so you can find a job easily.Unlike village, there are big and large houses.Moreover The city is different from village interms of population village because city include many of the opportunity.Acording to research number of people increasing who migrated from the village in the city.
As you can see there is a great difference between living in city or village interms of social life , economy, facilities.I think you should prefer living in city because ıt has much more attractive facilities,colorful social life and luxury.
"The most common places people prefer to live are village and city. However we,somehow come across disadvantages or advantages of the residence in any phase of our life" maybe you can change the order of these sentences.
ReplyDeleteyou can write your thesis better if you add "which are" like "but there are three main contrasts between them which are social life,economy,facilities."
your body paragraphs are rich enough. it is nice that you have given some examples and quotations.
however, maybe you can change the style of your topic sentences, because they all have the same structure.
the first contrast is ..
the second contrast is..
maybe you can write, living in the city and living in the village differ from each other in terms of social life. just an example..
your conclusion paragraph is also appropriate.
however, you have some grammar mistakes.