THE EFFECT OF ENTERİNG A UNİVERSİTY
Entering a university is a very important and interesting experience
in a person’s life,but at the some time it is an experience will change your
lifestyle and personality forever.There are three important effects of entering
a university which not have enough time of your old friends,learning how to survive
during university,and it help you to improve yourself.
The first effect is that you
don’t have enough time for your old friends.Your old friends go to university
in different cities like you.Therefore,you don’t meet with old friends.You meet
new old people at university,so you spend time going to the cinema or
theather,watching TV,going to cafe together.For example,I went to Denizli for
university.Some of my friends went to another cities such as İzmir,Ankara,Zonguldak etc.for
university.Therefore,we can meet and g oto somewhere together rarely fort his reason
,we can not see each other.
The
second effect is that you learn how to survive during university.Firstly ,if we
stay at home, you must learn to do housework such as cooking,cleaning,and
washing the dishes.For example,I stay at apart with my roommate.Before I came
to Denizli,I did not know how to cook.While I was living with my family,my
mother did to cook and clean for me.But now,I do all housework
myself.Secondly,if you spend much Money,you will be out of pocket.Thus,you must
learn.According to reseaches,lots of students work part-time to earn Money.For
example,my roommate Works part-time in Mcdonals.
The
third effect is that it helps you to improve yourself in two ways, academically and
socially.Firstly,you can go to different languages cources, g oto conferance
that give certificates to you,g oto different countries by Erasmus in order to
improve yourself in academically.For example,lots of students g oto different
countries such as Germany,Bulgaria,USD etc to have a good job in the
future.Secondly ,you can go to different enstruments courses,g oto the
gym,visit historical places with your friends in order to improving yourself
insocially.For example,my classmates and I went to picnic together in
Pamukkale.
Tos
um up,not having enough time with your old friends,learning how to survive
during university,and ıt helps you to improve yourself are results of entering
a university.You should get a university you wont regret never and ever.You
will provide a lot of things.
nice essay. your inroduction is good.
ReplyDeleteyour body paragraphs are rich enough. your used examples to support your paragraphs which is good.
your conclusion is also successful, but one of your topic is not seeing old friends, so this seems a negative way of entering university:) but you said you wont regret if you enter university, maybe you can also consider this:)
thanks,you're right.:)
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